What time is it?
As I worked on the pages for Fenton Hud #3 and the story came together I realised that all three story arcs were going to be set at a different time of day but I really wanted/hoped the reader would think that they were all happening at the same time.
So with that, this page was a big one.
There was clues earlier in the book with the colour of the sky in outdoor scenes and the mention of an ‘evening rush’ at the coffee shop but this was the page where what the time was for each character was either shown or mentioned.
I didn’t actually commit to the timeline for Fenton or Tabs until I finished the book as I figured the time of day might be shown on either Fenton or Tabitha’s phones. I had the start time for Cuddles arc and knew that Fenton would be in the coffee shop after rush hour and then just had to work out how long Tabitha had been at the bar for.
But most importantly, all three weren’t to cross paths so I really had to do some math on this one!
So, did it work? Were you fooled?
Man, I really hope so! And with this page done it got me to the next page and where things fully lined up but more of that next time!
Bear hugs!
